Laserforce

We are learning to write detailed descriptions of a place.
Have a read of Dong Hae's description of Laserforce...
At Laserforce I saw fake laser guns and protective vests and the vests felt a little bit heavy. I felt scared when I first got inside, but when I did the missions I didn't feel scared. I heard people's whispers because they didn't want to get spotted and get shot. I saw dark battle field and small shortcuts. The shortcuts were like small dark caves. I could only see a little bit of light coming from the guns and vests. When I had finished all our missions I wanted to go again because it was nearly the most fun place ever!