Wednesday, March 9, 2011
Rock Climbing - By Jerome
At morning tea time at school the clashing wind was so intense that it made me really cold. First I had to eat my morning tea. It was delicious. As time went by I was finished eating. I raced to the rock climbing wall. There was no sign of rain. I started climbing. I tried to avoid obstacles like people throwing other people's hats away and people taking other people's hands of the rocks. Finally I made it to the top of the rock climbing wall. When I was at the top I looked over the school roof and I could nearly see the whole view of the sky tower. I turned around and I could see the whole playground. I saw people going on the flying fox, through the spinning circles, and through the monkey bars. Suddenly the bell rang so we had to go back to class. I felt glad because rock climbing was fun.
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good work Jerome.I liked how you said your morning tea was delicious.:)
ReplyDeleteCool recount Jerome was it hard?
ReplyDeleteNo not really it was easy but i had some mistakes so the teacher had to fix the mistakes so it would be more better
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